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    French fluent speakers needed!

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by mbinks89, Feb 26, 2013.

    I'm writing an abstract, Joyce-esque piece.

    Il était un petit homme, chauve, mais une guirlande des cheveaux bordait autour du derriere de sa tête. Il portait des lunettes, et elles rendaient ses yeux massifs, comme des champs qui était couvert avec le neige . . .

    He was a small man, bald, but a garland of hair was rimming around the back of his head. He was wearing glasses, and they made his eyes massive, like fields covered with snow . . .

    Did I get this right?
     
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    C'était un petit homme, chauve mais avec une guirlande de cheveux qui bordaient l'arrière de sa tête. Il portait des lunettes, qui donnais a ses yeux une apparence énormes, comme des champs recouvert de neige...

    Hope this helps.
    You were very close.
     

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