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    Having trouble with a 10-person orgy scene

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Tenderiser, Jun 21, 2016.

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    Oh, my trouble with the 10-person orgy scene? Pronouns. One could say they're really hard.
     
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    Well played, old chap. :supercool:
     
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    One will certainly get a lot of views...
     
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    That never even crossed our minds :whistle:
     
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    Our? I hear conspiracy theories!
     
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    I did not collude with that man. :supercool:
     
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    You got me.
     
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    Exactly what is the correct pronoun for a gay helicopter?
     
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    "Whir".
     
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    Hey man, some gay helis don't want to bear with "whir" as their pronouns. Some prefer chi/chir/chim
     
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    So would whir and chir be analogous to he/she?
    Cause that might make "his" turn into "whis" or worse "chis"
     
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    You, good sir, are a genius.
     
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    Okay, I'll hold my hands up too. *Slinks off looking sheepish*
     
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    Shortest excitement ever. What?
     
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    Hey, if your excitement was the "shortest ever" my orgy scene did its job.

    Go me!
     
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    Are you describing your excitement when seeing this post title?
    Or perhaps your predicted stamina when attending a ten person orgy?
     
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    The secret is keeping track of what body parts belongs to who and entering what and in turn who that what belongs to.

    And yes, I rather discuss orgy scenes than think about contests. My English isn't really up to par and my writings been on the dry lately.
     
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    That's where the pronouns become a problem. There are going to be a lot of he/she/names to keep track of, and there's a real danger of writing a scene where somebody penetrates himself with his own penis. Or a gay helicopter gets tangled in his own blades.
     
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    And people wonder why we need more pronouns!

    To be fair to the gay helicopter, that might well enough be what gets him off. I mean, have you ever got your own blades all tangled up? Might not be as bad as it sounds. Might very well be a pleasant thing indeed. Then again, I wouldn't really know. My knowledge on helicopters are vague at the best. Throw in some erotic and I'm completely lost!
     
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    Well sex is the easiest way to get noticed. :p Ten sweaty writhing bodies, entangled in pleasures of the flesh. Sounds sticky to me, but then again so does dousing the lot in whipped cream. :superlaugh:
     
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