Okay, I'm stuck in my essay (creative writing) and I need help. I am suppose to be writing about my grandmother. (fictional character) My essay so far... It was a bitter chilly night. A group of doctors swarm the corridors. Nurses followed behind carrying foreign equipments. Their very presence scares me. I would not want some alien equipment operating inside my body. Fortunately for me, the doctors had a different patient today, who, ironically, happens to be my grandmother. My Granny. I never really knew who my grandmother really is. I knew bits and pieces of her life. I knew that she had a dysfunctional relationship with her parents. I knew that she had two unsuccessful marriages. I knew her life was a mess. But the details were sketchy, not clear. To be able to truly comprehend her would to be putting shards of glass together.... To be able to truly comprehend her would to be putting shards of glass together I can't put my finger on this sentence. Can someone help me revise it? or maybe perhaps give me a diff simile in a different sentences?? Basically, I'm stuck and I don't know what to do. I have a general idea to reveal my 'relationship' with my grandmother at the ending of this story. So far... its completely a bummer. Please help I really need it. P.S: I am a chinese My grammars and vocab aren't that great. Would really appreciate help. Thank you.