First, I will post my plot. Rayen, the main character, is a nineteen year old girl. She is a senior in high school. She messes around with magic a lot. She doesn't really care about much else, except for advancing her magic powers. She doesn't really have a handle on her magic, so it goes awry. Any who, after she makes a kid almost commit suicide with magic, she runs home. On the way home she keeps running through different worlds. These worlds are people's personal worlds. Some are violent, some are filled with money, some are filled with candy. These worlds are people's subconsciouses leaking into the real world. Along with people's subconsciouses leaking into our world, heaven, hell, nirvana, all the other worlds leak into our world. Rayen finds out that she is one half of the convergence. The other half is a young girl. I'm thinking ten, maybe eight. Rayen is the one who will preserve the world, allowing it to continue it's existence. The young girl is the half who will destroy it, remaking it in her image. Rayen can choose to accept, or deny the destiny, as it will be filled by someone. Then she learns, that whoever kills the other half of the convergence, acquires the other half's powers, to do with what the winner wills. Of course this means, that Rayen doesn't necessarily half to fulfill her destiny. She can re-create the world in her image, just as the little girl could. Rayen then goes through time bleeds. Parts of the past bleed into her present. She meets the last convergence person. The one who made it so the world could continue. It was her in her past life. Turns out she was a goddess. Rayen triumphs, and doesn't actually decide what to do with her new found powers. She wants to see how the world plays out first. Any who, the story is obviously about destiny, and how our choices affect it's outcome. And it is set in the future. I was wondering if it sounds like a good plot, or if it just sounds really bad. Is there something that should be changed?