"I cannot really stopper the night in a jar with the dark night wind." ^That's the sentence in question. The co-author of our book thinks the second "night" just looks clumsy - like either I didn't know I repeated myself or that I was simply too lazy to edit. I disagree with her. So, I'm seeking a second opinion... What do you think? And if you agree with my friend (eg. the second "night" should be scrapped), then could you suggest an alternative word? Because the rhythm of the sentence doesn't work for me personally without the word.