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    Looking for critiscism

    Discussion in 'Collaboration' started by Dagolas, Jun 25, 2015.

    Would anyone be available to critiscise something I wrote? I'm seriously looking at publishing if it gets finished, so I wouldn't want to post it in the workshop.

    It's a historical what-if piece, denouncing aspects of today's society. Would anyone be interested?

    Cheers,
    Dagolas
     
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    Sure, I'd be happy to!
     
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    How long is it?
     
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    7566 words so far.
     
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    Do you still need anybody?

    I just finished writing a 5k word horror story, and I would love to take a look at yours. Would you be interested in trading feedback?
     

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