I wanted to do the introduction to Gor'trek's Bloodbath... I mean, seriously, "they came upon an interesting looking rock, a arena carved out of the top of it,"? Is that seriously the best you can do?
sorry, make a flashy display of it if you want to, I just figured it was an arena on some random asteroid or something.
Well, the thing is, you've already beat me to it. We've already past the point where we leave hyperspace and enter the arena.
I has a solution. The asteroid is just a disguise. Upon entering we discover a new flashy abc stylized area that has been cloaked or something. bed time
BTH is OFFFFFF to beeed, ladies and gentlemen. (Really, just gentlemen, but you can never tell with the internet.) G'night y'guys. =] S'lookin' good by the way. I'm excited about what's going to happen with the Registration people (I don't remember. Was it registration? It was something like that.)
I just want to point out a couple of things here, normally I give out personality traits for characters, like in era of darkness, Ignis is a bi-polar matchstick. So here's how it goes: Tim- a demon, playing the demon with clever wittyness, disguised as another daemon with very bad tempermental issues. Lagamorph- a big scary thing in a cute and cuddly package Honorius- oldest piece of powerfully magically enhanced dirt that ever anyone saw Demos- personalized wardrobe with a personalized personality to match Quoten- unknown (I need to see more of you in action before I can determine a description that fits.)
you'll have to add Abraxas too (no one has spelled his name right yet...). althought im not even sure of his personality yet.
DAAMMMNNNNNN Honorius. Stellar job on Abraxas, man. Absolutely wicked. Just out of curiosity. I'm sure you didn't intend on giving it away, but... what's under the gray hood? Is the gray hood his body, or is there some sort of weird creature under?
Right. Sorry. Hood and robe. I get those confused sometimes. Sooo.. what's.... his face like? Or... y'know, general body...
hmm. think general human like. his demon part is classic demon, bassically an angle with bat or black wings. so he looks pretty normal.
you're misspelling angel, an angel, is a free spirit in heaven an angle, is a measurement in degrees, like a 90 degree angle.
Stellar, man. I like his personality traits too. Very well thought out. I'm excited to see how this Abraxas fellow plays out. >:]
Hm. What's registration going to be like anyway? Will it be like at airports? "Fill out this form and come back so we can search you and make sure you're not a security officer''? Or what?