I am rewriting my Pride Search story. I plan on having something suspenseful before Anapumua Moto meets Nala and starts a pride with her and her lioness friend. Now why suspense? Well, a lot of people say that suspense is a great thing to put in novels, even ones which otherwise aren't much thriller or mystery. Now the suspense I am not sure how I should put that in there. I was thinking maybe an elephant hunt or something. Now it has the same basic storyline(Duma running to Anapumua Moto in the hot afternoon, Leopard encounter(happens to be with 1 of Anapumua Moto's friends, Lioness encounter, Pride establishment, Sons establishing their pride, wild leopon birth, etc. and I know I am skipping quite a few events). But since I am rewriting it, the plot is going to be a little different. So I was thinking maybe something along these lines: Or something like that. This definitely has the disbelief that makes good fiction, good fiction. But does it have suspense or just disbelief?