In the first paragraph of chapter one of my story, I introduce three names of characters. What are the thoughts on this? I'm a real amateur at writing and any help would be much appreciated. The writing is still very rough and I'm making changes daily to what I have written, but I'd like opinions on this matter. Below I have added the opening paragraph so there is an understanding as to why I'm introducing three characters. I get nervous when I share my work, but I very much want to improve and go about writing correctly. Chris is the main character, Mike plays a major roll in the story as it develops. Thanks for the help.