I've finished with a tough piece of dialog between main character and protagonist. I'd like to get some other eyes on it, but it's a graphic novel script, not movie, so there's no action, only moments in time stills. It's part of a scifi graphic novel, but the scene isn't completely fleshed out. I tend to focus on dialog on first pass, then go back and work on scene details. So, I'm wanting to know if the dialog grabs people and gets them interested, while answering the questions of the main character and showing a change in him. Where should I go with this?