Blog Entries from mugen shiyo

  1. Progress

    :) It's Coming Along
  2. In The Dark

    I've noticed something... When you do not let the reader know early on why everything is happening bu just write in the moment, the rader is actually drawn so much deeper into your story. Because of the lack of information they seem disoriented and are looking hard through the words trying to find some bearing. It feels a little chaotic at first, but I think it does well because it lt's the reader feel what the character is likely feeling in that same situation. So I guess I'll work...
  3. He See's But Does Nothing

    He sees but does nothing When the long ones come by Dark and menacing With terrible eyes Holding black weapons Held up to the sky Titanic in size, The Long Ones arrive. He sees but does nothing As his townsmen come out. The women are screaming And the children shout. And the men are armed And all about. All, in doubt… Because the Long Ones arrive. He sees but does nothing As the Long Ones swept through Hacking and slashing As whole bodies...
  4. My Gems...

    Confidence Because I know who I am, what I am, I know that I can do it and I know it's only a matter of time. I see competition around me. Soon it is behind me, merely a memory as I proceed toward what is next to be. I simply have faith that it will be all right, regardless and in spite of anything. My confidence empowers my... Commitment I have been shaken, I've been made to tremble; I've been knocked back, and knocked down. So has everyone. It doesn't really matter. You proceed...
  5. The Dark Writer

    In a room where darkness dances with the flicker of candlelight, my blood stains the tip of a black feathered pen. In seclusion my dark heart pours from the vessel of my mind and piece by piece a dark vision is revealed into the world. What I finally decided is that I would write from this angle and explore it, digging far into the taboo beyond the mere need for novelty and more on the side of a primitive curiosity into those realms deep within us shrouded in mystery and curiosity....
  6. Who Said Profanity Implies Ignorance

    Most people say profanity and slang imply ignorance. So completely untrue. While I may spend an extra one or two minutes trying to intellectually divulge my feelings toward you a two second "Go F**k Yourself" expresses my range of thought quite clearly and efficiently. Slang also tends to do the same. While not viewed as professional, it is concise and much more efficient. People know what you are talking about when you say it. This goes for anger as well as happiness or joy. he very act...
  7. Black Birds

    I figured I should begin a story and see it through to it's end. Just a short one, but I'll see where it goes. Here is the prologue for "Black Birds"... It was evening when I saw her. Walking down the beach and behind her Castle Itura towered into the sky. She sat down beneath me- a lingering stare and a trailing smile as she looked into the waves under an orange sunset. Black, ringed hair whipping in the wind, she never said a word. It was the most crippling feeling I ever felt. More pain...
  8. Mrs. Kiss

    I told her don't go she said she don't know I told her that I had a thing I'd like for me to show. She sat down slow A pale-skinned woman who was quite thin curved little waist and a shy, pink kinda grin I wrapped my arms around her and I pulled her onto my lap the look inside her eyes said she was wary, looking for a trap but I just looked inside her then I popped and gave her thigh a slap she giggled and she rolled, I felt her fingers pull, probe, and tap "What do you...
  9. Just writing...

    Sometimes it has to rain so you can see which way the wind is blowing it can be hard when all the future is beyond your knowing you pray to God to stay ahead and keep your step from slowing though you may lose yourself when life gets into roller coasting the way is hard but i can tell you if you never noticed that you can shine if you just look ahead and keep your focus just buckle down and keep the way of calm- you are the lotus and find the real, avoid the fake, the fools, the...
  10. Review: Chinatown (1974)

    Well I thought I would never watch something that predated the year 2000. That was smashed when I was forced to watch "Gone With The Wind". I expected to fall asleep faster than I did for the first prequel of the new Star Wars Jedi movie with Annakin as a kid. But it turned out to be pretty epic, despite questionable morals of the cultural viewpoint. Seeing a clip of the movie on something else unrelated I decided to give Chinatown a shot. It helped that Jack Nicholson starred in it or...
  11. If Time Travel Were Possible

    If time travel were possible at any point in our future, it has likely already been done and men have likely already traveled into our past. And because men are men, I would have expected space-time to be torn to rags as a result.
  12. I Am

    I am The son of a father who fell farther than most. And a mother who was better off being a ghost. Haunted by dreams in which it always seemed that my parents sins teamed up to swallow me whole. And life would just grant me one pitiful role- a pitiful soul- in my very own eye. But, Light, did it seem that inside there were wings and in life there were beams of light brighter than dreams. And sunshine would fly and be mine if I tried And denied not the I that I knew was...
  13. Envy and Inspiration

    I'm feeling low...and inspired. I just watched some of the Game of Thrones episodes on cable and I'm feeling seriously intimidated. Anther fine work of story telling done on such a level that it makes my own story look...ugh. What I like most about Game of Thrones...the dialogue. The author has some cool wit, humor, and turn-of -phrase combined with the application of things like philosophy to just down to earth grit to hook you from all angles. I can see why HBO took the job. I'm...
  14. Interest...It's Nice When It's Yours

    I went to the mall for more pens and paper...and returned with a new laptop. Definitely not what I planned but I passed by the Best Buy Store and culdn't resist. Due to unfortunate circumstances my former laptop is n longer with us and that is about as inconveniencing as having no car in a rural area. Well, buying a laptop would have been a considerable bump in the budge BUT Best Buy has this awesome plan I never knew about called 18 month financing where you can spread your payments...
  15. Passing Lights

    They are like flames in the passing stars in my sight, that I can reach and feel the heat of an unexpected night. Every kind of color some more different than the others some daughters, some mothers some related to the others. Some walled behind their brothers or they're jealous other lovers that see us between their covers sharing secrets with each other saying that they're kinda smothered bored, trying to find another always trying to think and wonder what life would be...
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