1. This is a part of my fantasy novel that im writting, please inlighten me about what i can do better.

    Flickering between consciousnesses, Awuduwin could see rubble and ice being held above him in place. When he finally felt he as if he regained a bit of strength he crawled out from under the rubble glacier with bloody hands and an aching head. He pulled himself up to see the town on fire and people running away from knights with light emerging from within the armor, swinging their swords towards anyone who tried to get near…or far. The fires were massive and if not for the dark sky, Awuduwin...
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