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    I am curious on what other think about this section of a piece I have started, this is my first attempt at writing for a long time. Any suggestions on where to elaborate on description, fix grammar, or any other tidbit that would help. “Can we get some coffee?” shouted a man angrily, he was wearing a pinstripe suit, he looked very distinguished almost a George Clooney type, he was sitting with a beautiful woman in a red cocktail dress, her hair was long, blonde almost seemed without...
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