Morning on the Lake

By Cogito · Sep 17, 2007 · ·
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  1. A thousand ghostly serpents stretch
    pale heads above the lake,
    warning the rising white wavering
    Sun.

    Fearless a grey shell among them slips.
    Shadowed pilot lets oars drift
    launches a silent line;
    a soft plop; the figure waits
    in vain.

    A starling squawks, the only sound
    to pierce the peaceful air.
    The figure lifts his arm once more
    another plop, and rippling rings
    expand.

    Then a splash, the rod bends down
    the snake heads veer away
    as water churns and figure turns
    a crank.
    Net dips down,
    brings silvery prize
    aboard.

    The figure bends to take the oars
    and glides ahead once more.
    And stops.
    And waits.
    And baits the hook
    while silence reigns
    again.

    (This is a poem I started on 10July2007, and finished revising on 12July2007)
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Comments

  1. Radrook
    Nice poem! Here is how I would touch it up.

  2. Rapscallion
    I'm looking for a lesson you once wrote on grammar. It has to do with when and not to use quotation marks etc. That's how I ended up here. I'll find it eventually.

    Anyhoo, (needless to say) don't ever change that poem to what Radrook wrote. It's very peaceful and beautiful as it is.
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