yeah, the speaker is identified by just saying Bob clenched his fists i feel. I think said, shouted etc. don't really fit well with my story, it...
I would usually write the above as this.. "What did you just call my mother!?" Bob clenched his fists. Is this a good style? I'm writing a...
Thanks, that gave me some good ideas :)
So I'm writing my first ever novel and I'm trying to think up more ideas of how to describe a persons emotion... I'm using eyebrow movement, cheek...
I suppose it can be irritating if it is pretentious, which it is in a lot of cases... if you read really deep existentialism such as Dostoyevsky...
good info here.. i've always wondered about this... currently writing my first novel and not interested in writing short stories or even reading...
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