Sorry, there's another one of my issues. I write from a purely emotion based area, I get so wound up in emotion that logic and reason leave me....
Well, my main issue isn't that I don't like my characters. In fact for me I put my favorite characters through hell and kill them in the most...
So I have an issue with build up. Even though I have some great plots in my head, I have little to no patience. I start off slow, trying to...
Sorry, I hadn't visited this thread in ages so I didn't see the last few posts. Yeah, thanks hopefully I'll get round to reading that at some...
my characters don't really have one liners (And I'm pretty embarrassed at the one I tried posting earlier) mostly it's inside jokes and things...
I actually didn't notice until someone pointed it out to me one time by saying "I like how most of your characters are dark melancholic killers"...
Sometimes some of the things I wrote were so bad I could almost vomit. If you think my writing is bad now, a few years back I was misspelling...
Antagonist with a hostage; "Savior savior save-your bitchin for the bastard himself." he looked at his henchmen "Gag the bitch till he gets here."
I like number one, I just love how it's like "Fuck logic" but not in a mindless way. Just things like "seven eight nine" and "Rosie palms" are...
Well to be honest I'd probably have to know what effects the curse has to be able to help. But the main idea that came to me was maybe shortly...
Well, I think the best (or at least the easiest) way to have people be sympathetic but still scared is to have the antagonist doing horrible...
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