I would just tune down the healing factor a bit - just enough to keep it interesting. Some other possibilities: What if his powers aren't...
Well, there have been A LOT of vampires in media lately, but that might just show the demand is high. I think if your story isn't too...
Are you just unhappy with the word count? If the piece gets across the idea and does it quickly, that might not be a bad thing. It's hard for...
If someone wants to pirate something, they'll find a way. I think all you'll manage to do is inconvenience your legitimate customers.
It seems you have the idea that the novel will build in excitement and a lot of things will happen later on. So, the question is how do you...
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