36/100, woot! The list seems skewed with regard to genre (for example, there are four Jane Austen books!)
What was said: Can you proof-read my story? What was meant: Can you tell me how brilliant my story is and what a great writer I am? What was...
Celebrated my birthday with my family over Skype!
It's perfectly plausible that a time-travelling character would change history - just ensure that the changes have consequences in the future...
I think that overuse of swearing (even if true to the character) can wear on the reader. It's analogous to writing dialogue with all the "filler"...
Separate names with a comma.