I suppose it comes down to your personal philosophy. I believe there's more at the writer's disposal than mere words. If the physical...
Then why have chapters at all? Let's just abandon the convention entirely. We probably won't though. For the same reason that we keep acts in...
An appropriate length for a chapter is whatever you feel punctuates or otherwise influences the tone of what happens within that space according...
Still very unclear how you have multiple dragons now when some guy killed them all but one in the past. Will the rings be used to hatch all these...
I'm struggling to think in what context it would be confusing that your opening sentence states that this was not the first instance of a...
Do you not understand the sentence or are you confused as to why it is an issue? @Renee J, why is it such a bad thing to begin the book by giving...
You have a guy who killed every single dragon except one. So how are there dragons, plural, now?
So the dragon can make a ring out of its soul but can't make a book the same way? Why did the dragon create this ring to be worn specifically by...
Your first sentence reads like twenty-two people were positioned on top of a recording and then set on fire. If holograms are commonly used, why...
Then where did the ring come from? Who forged it?
Maybe the book is "written" by the first person who chose to take the ring...
Because dragons, being, you know, not real, couldn't possibly exist in a 20th century setting anyway. But that's beside the point. Could you...
“Anyone can check spelling and grammar. Why waste money on a professional editor? They don’t do anything a friend or family member can’t do.” Is...
Actually, yes, in this instance I would absolutely prefer you wrote something before getting advice about how realistic it was. My problem with...
Separate names with a comma.