Hi. I agree that with it being so many characters, an omniscient narrator would be the better choice rather than giving each character a first...
I think you have a wonderful premise. Here is how I would hope the story to play out. When she reaches a stable position and begins to search for...
Maybe she would retreat more into her own mind again, having lost some of her mental fortitude she built up before, because of the physiological...
If your back stories are as interesting as the story itself, that is really good! I think you should combine them and, like you said, sprinkle and...
The remaining part of the novel should be as inspirational to you as what you have written, so perhaps there is something you can do to inspire...
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