I apologize, I will try to get two reviews in this weekend possibly so as to post anything else like this in the workshop section. I thought...
Here is the new draft based on the feed back you gave me, @Bruce Johnson and @Xoic I hope you guys are ok with me using some of your suggested...
Thank you all for the feedback, I'm going to sit down tonight and try to re-write the description and I will try to post the new draft tomorrow
Thanks all, The dress isn't all that important to the story, the character will be wearing it when she meets here paramore for the first time but...
Hi, I was hoping you guys might be able to help, I'm writing my first story ever and I'm getting a bit hungup on describing clothing....
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