I look up stuff probably more than most. It's partly curiosity, partly insistence on accuracy. When we don't, we get incorrectly overused words...
Cool! It's neat to see how sentences can form and change to be better even when they seem pretty good from the start. If you're going to say...
Maybe you don't need it. I don't know for sure, but I think most scripts are words and instructions with sparing detail. Two characters enter....
I'm not a series writer by any means, so I'm not the authority on this, but I think it's best to work it in like a TV show. The show has a...
I think if you use the word "just" as in only or some other 'diminishing' sense, you can likely do without the word. Try removing it and see if it...
I'd just continue. I think the 'freewriting' approach will give you a better structure and will keep consistent across your entire piece. Unless I...
If you're watching the sun do something, like rise, you can say it's a noun and verb, and say "sun rise". If you're saying you're watching the...
I think adding a comma in place of "is" will fix that: Mary is five years younger than Richard, and she is much smaller than him, so much so she...
I was thinking activities! Came to mind just now. I like "experience" too. It sums up everything and so far seems to relate to everything I've...
Maybe "The ring was left on the table". That tells it all. Or if you want... "The ring was left on the table; perfume, in the air". Or something...
Frankly I think this would have been more powerful as a one sentence story. Keep the first one. The second overexplains it.
Red road. Dead toad.
Separate names with a comma.
