Give an example of both methods for the same scene or paragraph so I can see what you were doing and what you're doing now.
It sounds like you're talking about first person omniscient - which is extremely hard to do well. "I knew these streets well and walked them...
A reader does not need to know where they are before you start telling your story - Universe => Milky Way => Earth => United States => Austin =>...
Don't trash the story at all man. Interview with a Vampire is similar to what you're talking about, though while there are core similarities,...
So basically Interview with a Vampire - except Nighttime with a Werewolf?
My writing process is free writing. I appreciate structured writing, but I'm not very good at it.
Conquistador! A book about Cortez destroying the Aztecs.
I think that's a nice idea. I would have to ask though; why does the brother do magic when his form is simply different? Does everyone else see...
Dominos, Pizza Hut, Little Caesars and Papa Johns. There is a place called Tony's near Jersey Village that's good.
Oh man, drop the big 4 chains. I'm from Spring - I know there are good pizza joints in Houston. There is nothing better than finding a hole in...
If you aren't going or can't afford to pay for an editor, I would suggest tucking that first draft in your desk for a week and work on something...
You're thinking too much about the end result. Writers block, for specific projects like a novel, generally come from not knowing what comes...
So in your world, men also readily lie to impress lol.
Separate names with a comma.
