24 isn't that young in this universe. Think of the olden days before doctors had to get an undergraduate degree first. But yes, that is a good point.
Almost through the first draft of a multi-POV story, and I am quickly realizing that my female character is boring and cliched. I'm also afraid...
"An odd lightheadedness came over her, like pages riffling in a huge book in her mind." I wanted to tell the author of this sentence that I don't...
Trying to SHOW a character hawking a giant loogie right into the face of a judge sitting some 40 feet away from him. Needless to say, it is a...
Maybe I can just make him a king of some kind? ANd so he wants to get back to his small kingdom/fiefdom?
An 8 year old boy and his mother are forced out of their elaborate mansion owing to a crime committed by the boy's father (the...
yes
no, its just a very high table with a ramp running down the front. There are stairs in the back (behind the table) and thats how the judges get to...
Significant improvement, thanks a lot for the ideas. I wonder if my shadow imagery was understood though? (last sentence)
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