This is exactly the problem. The main character is far too passive. A big part of the story is about running away from mental and physical harm...
This is excellent. Thanks for the good advice, I have a lot of work to do! On the subject of his cowardice, I should have been clearer, it was...
Just asking for some general advice about first draft completion and next steps. I've finished my first draft (yay) bought the 'self-editing for...
I've found with these sort of things that it is rare for them to be designed as massive sprawling worlds initially and that comes much later as...
Hi there, Unpublished, wannabe writer here. I've been writing for some time, mainly in the science fiction genre with some mild dabbling in...
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