The pills are helping do her job, in the relationship and investigation. But how? What should be the effect of that pill
It does make sense. The thing is: is a huge challenge for me trying to sum it up for you all in a way that is not super big or boring
I'll try to sum it up: Main character: beautiful girl who's loving father out of the blue became depressed and very agressive after something...
I agree with the second part of what you said. I also think they can get exhausting. But I think are indeed more personal and immersive.
I was having a bad day. My apologies.
Good stuff thanks! That helps A LOT!
You don't pay attention, do you? Harry Potter is a third person book. My whole point regarded the first person viewpoint of a female character...
Just exactly what part of what I said made you think that I don't see them as people? Seriously... do you must bring your agenda everywhere?
Well, I don't know if everyone is going to agree with me on that one, but here goes: your main character is female and you are a dude so I don't...
Anyone?
Thank you all. But the place where is hidden is actually the easy part. I'm I'm really looking for (and having a hard time) is coming up with a...
Yeah but I want for the stash to have been forgotten there. So I need I good story to back that. No one knows the stash is there and it has been...
My main charater father's was a loving dad and husband. He was a lab scientist his whole life then some day he came back home after work,...
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