I think it's hard to not get too awful mushy in such a situation. As Peach already said, keep it in a place where they are constantly interrupted...
Lol I wasn't implying that everyone in college does/did it... I just did and know sooooooooo many people who did, also. And I'm not treating it...
The girl was adopted by her uncle who is mafia - I feel like she needed to pick up on something that they did other than the main focus of the...
Thanks for the feedback guys. I shall keep working on it and amend later. =-] And what I mean by lull chapter is that it's not full of the...
I am not much of a science fiction author, but I do read it occasionally. Whether your characters are humanoid or not, people will still...
I have been working on my novel for a while now, but I'm stuck on a chapter. I know where it's going, I know what needs to be done... It's just...
All I can offer is that everyone is different. As long as you follow her personality traits throughout the novel you should be fine. There are...
:( I feel that the entire world needs to pull together on this - murders in general. I know no one in his or her right mind would ever kill a...
Or very right. Ok, dirty joke for the day, sorry - had to! On a serious note, I would change the word. I can see knees jamming like hinges -...
I get the same with my husband. He repairs weapons and (aside from hearing all of the crazy guns people carry), he's always coming home with a new...
I suppose I find them childish because they are almost always written out for children - I've seen a few shows/read a few books that attempted to...
To me, it's not the question of whether or not music playing is alright, ut what kind of music fits my mood. If I'm working on a fantasy story...
Also, the type of soldier matters. Not all opt for handguns, and not all have the choice. Those in close-quarters (particularly those who must...
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