In my opinion, that's something that fits better in a movie. Sure, you can state that following text will be said by the voice of another...
Yes, I fulfilled all the requirments for posting in the workshop. Good idea, I could make a piece on Engish only. Some critique sure can't hurt....
Thanks everyone! You guys are really helpful! I will try my best to enforce advices you gave me!
I do not have access right now as it is on computer. Anyway, I will let you know when I get computer and translate my dialogues so you can check...
As title says, that would be my question. I've started writing book and as much as I am pleased with descriptions, dialogues kill it. When I read...
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