I also forgot to mention that the last part is also Kei's thought. He is a very self-aware character and when thinking about himself it can seem...
I just finished my seventh page and I wrote all the thoughts in italics. I copied that and then rewrote all the the thoughts without italics, but...
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Thanks for the awesome responses! It sounds like italics are becoming an accepted form of conveying thoughts in fantasy at least. I'm not too...
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I do my character organization a little bit different than everyone else on here. I put my characters in a timeline as well as a flow chart. The...
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