I didn't quite get the gist of that, but I'm interested in seeing a sample sketch if you find them.
That's going to be my all-time favorite line now, lol. That's great.
Potentially, there are many things you could use. A conversation or situation that was blown out of proportion, supposed favoritism, envy,...
I think a *graphic* or *adult*, etc. in the title would do.
I use ST's method when working through passages that refuse to be written, breaking it down into finer and finer details. Usually I just hash out...
Maybe she's running for office, and is someone who the old guard doesn't want to let in, like a reformist. If there's too many hands in the pot,...
Perhaps the sister had done something to the brother far off in the past that had not been forgiven by the brother. A bit cliche, but that's the...
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