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  1. Damage718 replied to the thread short story idea.

    There was an awesome cartoon in the late 80's/early 90's called Captain N: The Game Master that had a similar premise. In the show, a...

    Sep 27, 2020 at 5:13 PM
  2. Damage718 replied to the thread Continuity error? Or nitpicking? Please help!.

    I fixed it, and just went with "the week prior." To answer this question: It was originally two days because the two characters were...

    Sep 26, 2020 at 3:36 PM
  3. Damage718 liked Thom's post in the thread Continuity error? Or nitpicking? Please help!.

    It never is.:D And 'the week prior,' 'the last time they spoke,' 'a few days ago,' fixes it pretty nicely.

    Sep 26, 2020 at 3:29 PM
  4. Damage718 liked Urocyon's post in the thread Continuity error? Or nitpicking? Please help!.

    It may be catch-able, but also easily reasoned away, as you've done in the quote. You've given yourself a nice backdoor here, and it's...

    Sep 25, 2020 at 1:24 AM
  5. Damage718 replied to the thread Continuity error? Or nitpicking? Please help!.

    As it turns out, I will change it to "the week prior" or something. I've noticed a couple other minor errors in the copy in other parts...

    Sep 25, 2020 at 1:23 AM
  6. Damage718 posted a new thread.

    Continuity error? Or nitpicking? Please help!

    Bear with me on this question, please. I'm at the paranoid/nervous stage of final proofing :p I'm going through my 2nd and hopefully...

    Forum: General Writing

    Sep 24, 2020
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