I'd say this piece of advice in particular is quite helpful, thank you.
My post apocalypse story is the question asked by a farmer getting a startup: "I have all the tools and resources I need to cultivate something...
I think this does give a good pointview though, don't feel bad
In my story's lore I've been writing, I've been doing things such as establishing where humans came from and how the new wave of humans understand...
Some problems here: -Mistakening disembodied arms for branches, robot or human, would require some degree of the character being incompetent or...
I'm still in the process of introducing the concept before explaining it, that idea could work if they were introduced after the initial...
The story I'm writing has a massive hurdle I have to get around in order to continue, one in which the following needs to be accomplished: 1- An...
Back up a bit on that comparison, I mean cartoon realism in the way of pulling back death and walking on the edge of full realism. Example: I fell...
I'd like to throw another bone I should've tossed a while earlier with the rest of the skeleton, I'm operating with a sort of cartoon realism to...
I'd like to say lodged in his head to hit his skull but not penetrate it, so it could be reasonably assumed it's responsible for head injuries but...
There's a certain stretch to how far unrealistic can go when it can have realistic effects. Cartoon: propelling one's self with dynamite into the...
I've talked with others on the topic how he removes the ice tray and was asked "why does he have that in his head?" I realized then and there I...
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