Diane, that actually gave me a few good ideas. The game they play is table top role playing, with all of the role playing sessions actually being...
Thank you for the reply. I decided on a drawn out falling out. He's asked to leave when the new girl is introduced, after making a bit of a scene....
Welcome to the site, and well done, for being so close to finishing your first novel! Do you find it challenging to write a novel with such young...
I personally wouldn't recommend taking a year off, though that's based solely on my life experiences and not yours. I can't tell you what to do...
Thank you for your thoughts. I've had a chance to sleep on it. I'll probably try to write the scene a couple of different ways to see what sticks....
So, up to this point in my story, the guy I want to turn into the antagonist have been a part of the main group of friends in the book for a few...
(Yes, as in that. I wasn't sure if the 'puns' was part of the association or a pun on my name, so just went with night) Diet.
Exhausted.
Mourning.
Shroud.
Separate names with a comma.