Stories have four threads; the event story, the character story, the new world story and the mystery story. The event is what turns the world on...
In Sharpe, Sargeant Harper received 100 lashes for stealing the Officer's valuables and Private Dobbs took 75 for fainting during drills. Hope...
Conflict This is good, but it will need some conflict to move it on. SOMETHING LIKE: If he spreads the religion, he will cease to exist or...
I like it ThIs story has a lot of potential, although you need to focus it somewhat. Consider writing a single line description that sums up...
Strong Story You need more to your story than that. The concept of a man ending up in the body of a soldier in a war is fine, but you need...
Hello, My name is David Jae and I have just joined the Forum. I am a self-published author with a book published on Kindle. I'm looking...
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