Perhaps these demons need the souls to transfer back to the fog itself. These demons could be spawned from the fog and therefore are part of it....
Killing off a main character is fine, but the real problem is the way you go about it. I find that if you kill off the main character, or any...
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I totally agree that it makes the story much easier to write without the constraints of parents, but is it really more interesting? Think of it...
Often, in popular YA and childrens books, the parents of the main character are either dead, irrelevant, or simply gone. This occurs as well in...
This idea is similar to Mallory's, but maybe they can only lift objects that they would physically be able to lift. So say they are really weak...
I know it's terribly close minded of me, but if I find a book is written in present tense, I put it down immediately. For some reason I absolutely...
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I really like your idea! Though I'm not sure how to help you, I just wanna say pursue the idea.
An anime you can look into with the personification of the 7 Deadly Sins, is Full Metal Alchemist. Just read it's wikipedia page and you'll find...
Where does she meet this Alpha? Perhaps she goes along with a hunting group of the Native Americans and it starts with them stalking the wolf,...
Perhaps the reason that main character finds himself in this dimension or place is because he is in fact a famous musician who had just died....
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