Hi Ginger, my "issue" was having these cuts literally a paragraph, or less, apart and not separated by full chapters. And based on the advice...
It was supposed to be one of those "goosebumps" kind of moments... like the dog howling when it's master dies hundreds of miles away. Thanks for...
*** Hi Ed, sorry if it's getting confusing. My story mostly takes place in the past, but has moments of time travel to the future, and all...
Thanks for responding, Ed -- I picture this in my head more like a movie... Bob searches the battlefield for his son... his eyes go wide when he...
Thanks so much for your help. I'll check out the Stephen King book. But with regard to the "reaction"... if you were writing about Nemesis......
Here are two scenarios that, as a first-time (fantasy) novel writer, are a little problematic for me... The first is time travel-ish: Over a...
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