I get what you're saying. I just want to be able to make sure they feel something towards him before he starts to get into problems.
No, he returns home early in the story but with missing memories making it hard for him to remember his password to his computer for example. His...
First person. My plan is to use dialog between him and other characters to uncover memories like you mentioned.
Here is my current dilemma. I came across a video detail mistakes writers make in their first Act. One point that hit home for me was starting...
My name's Darren, I'm an amateur in writing. I've recently started outlining my own stories to help with my musical block. I wanted to make music...
Separate names with a comma.