Currently in a huge slump. Haven't really written anything since my last post. I want to blame covid, but in reality I haven't developed any kind...
Caught a cold. Cannot contain it.
I mean, he doesn't have fear, but he knows he'll probably need his fingers/eyes/skin in the future. The rational desicion would be to give the...
Funnily enough, I actually work more now than before. My old job had to close down, but I'm hired by a small hospital/clinic, making sure no...
It's a question of POV. If your MC is the POV character in scenes with his father, it would be jarring to use the father's name in the...
That's exactly my point. What I'm getting at is the conflict of what I think is the truth (That there's nothing inherently pretentious about...
Sometimes I feel like the very act of intentionally aiming to be profound redacts from the authenticity of what I want to write. Some nagging...
I definitely agree with you on not using the dates. "Three years ago" is just very clear. When I read the first "Two weeks later" in the post, I...
If this is a fire breahing dragon, I imagine food wouldn't rot in the mouth, avoiding dog-breath. They'd be scorching the organic material to ash...
It very much depends on who (in story) made the word, and what those people thought of that group. If say, magic is viewed with suspicion or fear...
Some junk from my brain: The ascended The voice Herald (Depends on circumstanes) The link The blessed Savior The waves (referring to shipwreck....
Not sure "nor" works there. Had it been "Worthy aren't", I could've bought it, but while they're "Unworthy" it feels a bit off. I'd go with "or"...
Frontier - Foremoster. "You're in front, but I'm even frontier". Cucumber - To pick the shortest line, only to find out it moves the slowest....
I mostly adlib. Trying out names in my head, writing them out etc. Does it look/sound stupid? Next! I'm a bit of an "Aerith and Bob" guy, about...
Separate names with a comma.