This is true. Anyone who is writing a vampire story should go read the wiki on them. Do you know that in most cultures vampires used to be...
As long as you do not set out to have a hidden meaning there should be no problems. All stories should have a meaning, but if you set out...
I prefer the first plot idea with the diner scene. Plus, you can always take it out later if it doesn't flow.
Thanks all. I just can't stand it when someone tells me, don't write in such a passive tone, but they can't give me an example of a phrase I...
Thank you all for your warm welcome :)
I don't see why this isn't plausable. However, and I am not war lord, but I would think the one wall would not be a very good defensive, since if...
Okay, I don't consider myself a stupid person...but I don't get the passive voice thing. At least, I don't get it enough to really change my...
Grapes of Wrath & Billy Budd
I agree that unless it is essential you may not need to state blatantly that it is 'the next day'. Personally I've never had a problem...
I agree that the trendy fantasy stories can be a little overwhelming. But, I usually don't have a problem with 'fun reads'. It is the trendy...
Hello. I'm a 25 year old female living in the Houston, Texas area and just happened upon this forum. I write for fun when I feel like it. I...
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