Hmmm. Well, I'm not an expert on the different rules of various points of views, but I can't see a reason why you wouldn't be be able to do that....
Hello! I'm new to the forum too but I am really enjoying it so far. Hope you do, too.
I agree. Character development is crucial and often necessary, I think, before major plot advancements can be made. And even in parts of books...
Getting in the flow, I guess. I have a tendency to stop and re-read and re-write too often; I know I need to just write and then later go back and...
Story: Substance, Style and Structure by Robert McKee (it's a screenwriting book but I find it is very helpful for writing novels/fiction as well)...
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I like Cogito's revision of the sentence. I think adverbs are rarely necessary. Changing "mindlessly" to "vacantly" doesn't change the meaning...
Hello! My name is Emily Kevil and I'm a 21 year old aspiring writer and artist from California. I'm so excited to have found what seems to be a...
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