Agreed. He's not the guy you really want to follow. Thank you for the large amounts of advice! :)
Interesting point.
Thanks for your input, I'm working in changing those bits of the plot, because as you said, they are not things police would really do, and in the...
Thank you :). I'm working on research now
Wow. I didn't think that through did I. What do you recommend? Maybe police do mass evactuations of certain areas? With skirmishes from the riot....
Wow! Thanks :). I'm totally going to check that out now
I really need a title for this. I mentioned it briefly in my into thread (HERE) and I just put a thread up for help with character development,...
As you MAY (not definite) have seen from my intro thread that I posted yesterday (HERE), I am working on a personal series set on the future. It's...
Thanks for a reply. I love writing dystopian :) Thanks for sharing the guide, I'm gonna go check it out straight away :)
New to the community and I cannot wait to discuss ideas with the community, share feedback, and hopefully pursue my dream as a writer. I'm not...
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