Before Lydia could reply, the girl who had been bitten spoke up. “That little fucker better pray it never sees me again or it will be a hammer....
Because I'm trying to bring out your inner antagonist. Every writer needs to focus on their inner antagonist if he or she is to write anything...
Am I getting on your nerves yet? If so, well... SORRY!!!!!!!!
Maybe I should take over for you so you can go take a nap. LOL.
This happy-go-lucky attitude your character has is completely out of character for someone who's supposed to be a leader.
And his hobby is staring at the back of his eyelids because he likes to sleep. Right? Fine. Call me paranoid. Seriously though, you should...
But hey, it's just a story, right? There are no hidden truths to be seen. At least, not by most people. Right, Kingy-Wingy?
You mean, was confident it would be fine. Why did you change Gary Garrison's name to Charlie, King? And why did you write that Charlie's...
With the way things are going, Mr. King's store will probably lose so much profit on the first day it will go out of business before the week is...
Seeing Lydia, Chunk turned and walked briskly away. She and Lucky Charms, it seemed were having a conversation about...the Lion King? "Yeah,...
"Oh yes, Garrison. Ivan here seems a bit uptight--wanted to kill one of the rodents who has been driven mad by the lack of food and water. Seems...
"Not this one," Chunk said, snatching the rodent from her hands. Holding it by the scruff of its neck, listening to it shriek, he grabbed a Happy...
Chunk turned around, catching a whiff of death and decay coming from the pet section. What in God's name? Had the animals been shipped in two...
I almost pointed out the fact that she was obviously lying, that she'd fallen through the ceiling and shattered a shit ton of light bulbs while...
“Clean up on aisle nine, bitch.” "As you wish." Picking up the Styrofoam cup, he turned and left her with Charlie, following the trail of...
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