You're focusing too much on your character. Characters are tools for storytelling. No matter how much you love them, they are effectively...
That strikes me as more of a theme or motif, but okay. Perhaps this is a sign that you are going about it wrong? Like, maybe you and Weiland...
You strike me as one of those unfortunates who started too late. You're at a point where you know what you're doing wrong even before you do it....
So grab something sharp Find some cover Kill the lights and nail the back door shut This isn't funny anymore Oh no, this means war!
Complexity? I don't know all of these characters but out of the ones I do, they tend towards complex characterization where their motivations...
Look into Proto-Indo-European language and mythology. Turns out that a whole lot of mythology can be traced back to the PEIs. As in, they...
That's nice. For the record, I was speaking purely from personal experience. Awesome! So, then, you should be able to appreciate what I'm trying...
...Um, so? Even if the commentator expressed themselves poorly, that doesn't mean they're wrong. This is an appeal to emotion, or a tu quoquo,...
I mean, you don't have to. But, you know, it's the nice thing to do. Perhaps a more... generous interpretation would be that they were...
"Equally skillfully written" is an interesting way to put it, since successfully selling an unconventional story structure would probably require...
My favorite quote about rules is from Sir Terry Pratchett. Paraphrased: "The reason we have rules is to make you think before your break them."...
Why would your writing be influenced by an awful show? Other than in a positive way, I mean. Truly bad stories are useful because they teach you...
Not using his powers was basically what I meant by "having an off switch." But I guess what I was trying to say is that his metabolism should...
I just want to point out: This is called having an inferiority complex. He misinterprets - willingly, albeit subconsciously. He makes excuses....
Writing horror is basically the same as writing romance: Establish a tone, make your readers anticipate (and wish for) certain outcomes, add a ton...
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