Fearful, terrified possibly. So much so that he, ironically, attempts suicide, but this very irony stops him. It dawns on him, that it is living...
Does anyone create profiles for their characters at the start of a novel, or soon after? If so, what do you include, and how do you go about this...
This letter has been through many changes since I first posted it. My most recent effort, one that I have used is this. Dear.. In line with...
Hi. I really appreciate this, however, if you scroll through you will see that I have made many changes. The last one is more or less the one I...
I have an MC who uses an alias. He is known to the reader by his real name at the start. There is a shift and the reader is told in this way:...
Thank you.
Such excellent help with this. I have moved it on a bit. I am going to show the para in context this time. I am not seeking feedback on the query...
I guess I should have mentioned this is an extract from a query letter I am working on.
Dialogue in a query is not something I have ever seen.
This is about a short paragraph. The first version was this. 1) Danny and Megan dispose of the bodies and are now complicit in murder. As they...
Separate names with a comma.
