He is not an enabler. On the contrary, he actively tries to stop her but he sees her behaviour as a cry for help rather than that of someone...
Hm, I've seen several characters that do bad things but are still very likeable. In fact, as far as I know these are some of the most popular...
I've researched but I haven't found anything that helps me overcoming the problem I'm having. Due to some of my characters' personalities, some...
Yes, I definitely agree with a lot of your points. Some of the other users have already given me some great ideas on how to equal out the playing...
The society is based on their abilities. As groundwork for this idea, I chose astrology. Some people believe their lives are determined on the day...
Thanks for the reply. I think you are right about adding one or two negative to sacral magic. I will definitely work on that :) I hinted at it in...
Since it was clear to me I didn't consider the fact that some parts of the magic system don't really make sense without context. At the heart of...
I would love some objective opinions on my magic system. It’s supposed to be a hard magic system and I want both magic forms (see below) to be...
Thanks for your reply. Yes, the loot has two meanings. First of all, it was there to establish the fact that the attackers were in fact thieves....
First of all, thank you for your reply. I've also thought about combining chapters 1 and 2. Chapter 1 is longer than it sounds because I need to...
I’m currently writing a story with Dark Fantasy as the main genre but I’m struggling to set up the inciting incident. I know that some stories...
To everyone who took the time to reply, thank you so much. It’s really interesting to see the different responses. In order not to bombard this...
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