Thanks for the feedback. I like your rewrite of line 2.
Editing a short story the other day, I came across this sentence: (1) "He was not welcome but not necessarily unwelcome." Logically, that...
Oh, so mixing and matching titles, family names, and offices is a British thing. I edit for an American publishing company, but we have some...
Thanks everyone. While I have some training as a creative editor, most of my training is in technical editing, so I tend to doubt myself in the...
By legal name, I mean first name. The first name and nickname are very similar. Everything is under an NDA, so I will say that the first name is...
I'm editing a short story. The writer has the narrator switch between using the main character's legal name and nickname at random. Thinking this...
Separate names with a comma.