hmm okay, oh and thanks jess, was thinking about manhunt myself ;) with the possibility of tyrese starting to discover his power along the way
shiiiit okay. has she perhaps left something behind in her apartment which leads to that building? (cuz tyrese is about to bust in)
pet peeve is the lack of emotion in some stories. ie characters mother and father and brother die and goes to revenge them blah blah blah but...
glad ur back. where exactly is phoebe atm? is she still at her apartment?
thanks for that, downloading it now
Number 2 sounds really cool so personally that one for me number 3 sounds a bit cliched for some reason and number 1 just sounds weird lol...
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the reader will never think wtf if you have skipped time lol alot of books do it so i dunno why your worried about it
as long as there is a reason for the characters death, like its a catalyst for something else. ie eddard stark being jailed/executed was a...
charlie must die. evokes emotion from the reader and is a great surprise for them since most authors keep their main characters even in situations...
the entire story haha! but sometimes i write bits faster than other bits such as fighting scenes and certain talking scenes so i guess they're my...
share the idea with us ;)
definitely not the same as falling in love and i havent had a crush with anyone for a long LONG time lol, since my gf and i parted late last year
if you write something you don't like, it generally won't sell
sooo not dialogue tags? ie he says no and then afterwards he ejaculates? k...
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