Sounds like one of those things where you climb a mountain and after you chatted to the wise man on top you get an answer which was there all the...
I've been looking for a writers forum and found it. The problem is is I'm not able to get to a writers group or seminer so this is the best thing...
I write funny hours not because I have to but because of my work hours, welcome to the board.
Great to start young; good luck.
I just can't get along with books meant for teens so I got the first book and read it, sorry didn't like it but hopefully learned something.
Use a colon because your using a list.
Separate names with a comma.