I know I haven't been active recently. I've been so very busy. My family is in dire straights, but I want to make sure I don't break any rules. I...
LMAO that's a good one
On a side note this is the conjunction and box. I had them reset my rules so I can show it to you. [IMG] hmm it doesnt want to show...
I stopped using grammarly for now until my trial of ProWritingAid expires. There were too many conflicts and stuff. But yeah, a few "passive"...
I hoped you would give me an example by restructuring what I have. That often works better than telling someone something. It all boils down to...
So, what do you suggest? How would you restructure things?
Thorberry has a clipped quality to his speech. He learned how to talk at eight years old instead of naturally as a toddler. Although he lived for...
Right, then I think I'll disable that rule or take it with a grain of salt.
Passive verbs sprinkle my writing like a little salt on a dish. They're not like you would use them on french fries but more like a garnish. That...
I set it to Fantasy, which is my genre. General fiction doesn't seem to change that much from fantasy.
It's easy to add in if necessary and once I am done with ProWritingAid, I'll be going over the book once again and see if I can't avoid the comma...
Thank you both, but Seven crowns found one that we missed. "...getting vegetarian werewolves, <- the equal status they deserve.” Thank you. I...
I've been giving ProWritingAid a try. It's an amazing tool but it seems to want me to go comma crazy. Before almost every "and" a lot of other...
Separate names with a comma.
