@mashers - that's true, it did sound peculiar to me, I think I will re hash this sentence and using @Terry D idea I will show how his character...
@Mckk - No there isn't any reason I have to write in 1st POV so I think I will try 3rd POV to see that is easier for me. I did enjoy how Hunger...
I am having some difficulties finishing s description for the main character. '.....his warmth would radiate from the crinkle in his eyes...
Thank you for all your help, I will look over what I have written and see what I can improve/change.
Thank you all for your help, I think I have to have a think about some of the advice given. @deadrats - I will definitely try and read more, I...
Hi, I am having some trouble writing descriptively, my story is in 1st person so I am having a hard time trying to figure out where I should put...
Thank you all so much, I am going to have an outline of where I want the story to go and then just let it flow because atm I am still trying to...
Hi All, I am writing for the first time - hesitantly. Before I can even get to the juicy parts of character development, twists and all that jazz...
Hi All, I am writing my first story and I am having some difficulties about how to set up the inner thoughts of the character. I have wrote what...
I'm having that trouble atm. I have my mind set on having a name with the letter 'S' but other than that I don't really know. I'm thinking of...
Separate names with a comma.
